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Author Brutti ma buoni
Title Feast and Famine
Prompt EAT ME cake
Rating PG13 with terribly rude words alert
Words 200
Setting season six, after As You Were and before Seeing Red



Eat me.

She might as well have a fucking sign on her.

Eat me, I'm tasty and distracted. Eat me, evil fiends. Eat me, wipe me from the face of the Earth. Take me away from all this. Unmake me. Devour me, you fiend, till there's nothing remaining to hurt like this.

He wants to eat her, in all possible ways. Make her come or make her go, deep into a quiet place which no one can drag her back from. The taste of her blood on his tongue, iron-rich and nourishing, making him what he used to be. Or else her mouth, her cunt, her skin under his lips, he wants them again, sweet and feeding his soul. Or rather whatever it is he has in lieu that isn't quite a monster these days. The thing that she feeds in him, nameless and struggling for life and honour or something like it he left behind two lifetimes ago.

He's starving, and she's begging to be consumed. But not by him. Not any more. And, while he has his strength, not by any other ravenous beastie.

Trouble is, he's not sure how long that strength will last. He's famished.

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shapinglight
May. 14th, 2011 09:00 am (UTC)
Oh terrific! Very dark, but then it was a very dark time for them.
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 14th, 2011 06:58 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Definitely dark times.
quinara
May. 14th, 2011 09:06 am (UTC)
Oh dear, this is quite a scary one! Very evocative, though - nice job.
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 14th, 2011 07:12 pm (UTC)
*pats* It will all be okay.

Well, in the end.

Kind of.
moscow_watcher
May. 14th, 2011 10:26 am (UTC)
*shudders* Well-done.
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 14th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
zanthinegirl
May. 14th, 2011 05:33 pm (UTC)
I like the imagery you use here; very chilling!
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 14th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
smells_corrupt
May. 14th, 2011 06:24 pm (UTC)
Well done!
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 14th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
:)
slaymesoftly
May. 15th, 2011 09:33 pm (UTC)
Dark and satisfying - kinda like chocolate? :)
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
Mmm, the bitter kind that doesn't go to your hips... *g*
anviloverheaven
May. 15th, 2011 11:25 pm (UTC)
Brilliant...
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you!
ever_neutral
May. 16th, 2011 02:51 am (UTC)
OH. THIS. IS PERFECTION. I adore it.

This:

Make her come or make her go, deep into a quiet place which no one can drag her back from.

is gorgeously dark and creepy and SEXY, in a way only S6 S/B are, of course. ;)

And that last line is a killer.
brutti_ma_buoni
May. 16th, 2011 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! Such a rich lot of emotions in Spike at this point, he can't help be interesting to write.
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