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Ficlet: Incursion

I seem to be running a week late on prompts. Oh well, hereunder something for last week...

Title: Incursion
Prompt: Trespass
Setting: mid s6
Rating: Call it PG13? Sex is in the air, but not on the screen.
Words: 150



She's awake.

He's asleep. (Dead still – how else could he be?)

Fingers creep into personal space.

Her hand, golden brown, warm, living, looks like an intruder against his pallor. She traces his ribs, too sharp against his skin. He takes more care of her than of himself. His belly is concave, even in his relaxed sprawl. Her hand sits there, comfortably.

She can feel the edge of crisp hair against her thumb. If she moves, it will be an outright caress. He's asleep. Hasn't invited this touch.

What's she waiting for? An invitation? Like he hasn't asked for her hands before. Begged for them. She has rights of access to this territory, for as long as she wants them.

So she trespasses into touch. He arches into her fingers, sudden movement transforming him from corpse to life. He's smiling as his eyes open.

She should invade his privacy more often.

*

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petzipellepingo
Mar. 22nd, 2011 09:23 pm (UTC)
She should invade his privacy more often.


Isn't that a lovely thought. Very nice.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 22nd, 2011 10:13 pm (UTC)
Mmm, a very nice thought. Glad you enjoyed!
shapinglight
Mar. 22nd, 2011 10:04 pm (UTC)
That was lovely, and very, very sexy.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 22nd, 2011 10:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you! (That icon is perfect for a timestamp on this - call it 60 seconds later?)
louise39
Mar. 22nd, 2011 10:58 pm (UTC)
Quiet, non-threatening and so erotic!
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad the mood came across to you.
gillo
Mar. 22nd, 2011 11:34 pm (UTC)
Mmmm. Nice. I totally agree with the last line!
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:47 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much!
slaymesoftly
Mar. 23rd, 2011 12:17 am (UTC)
Sexy Spuffy - always a winner! And a lovely little moment for them.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:57 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
norwie2010
Mar. 23rd, 2011 12:17 am (UTC)
You know words, as i've come to recognize. ;-)


Thank you for another one of your gems. :)

brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:58 pm (UTC)
Aww, thanks so much!
quinara
Mar. 23rd, 2011 12:21 am (UTC)
Awesome. :D
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:59 pm (UTC)
*g* Yay!
readerjane
Mar. 23rd, 2011 02:09 am (UTC)
Oh, lovely. Quiet and intense.

Also, I love to see Buffy at least thinking about whether she's invited. Because, so often, she didn't.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 06:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Buffy thinks about it here, when she really is welcome - hesitant about being wanted, where she's far more confident in being an antagonist.
ever_neutral
Mar. 23rd, 2011 04:55 am (UTC)
Aww, this is weirdly sweet for their S6 affair.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 07:03 pm (UTC)
*g* I'm letting them have a moment.
wallows
Mar. 23rd, 2011 10:59 am (UTC)
That was was lovely and hot and contemplative even.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 07:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
hello_spikey
Mar. 23rd, 2011 03:23 pm (UTC)
AW! Sleeping Spike. :)

Very seductive little piece, full of touch and motion. Love it!
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 07:03 pm (UTC)
Mmm, sleeping Spike... *g* Glad you enjoyed it!
thisficklemob
Mar. 23rd, 2011 07:38 pm (UTC)
Nice.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 08:56 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
moscow_watcher
Mar. 23rd, 2011 08:17 pm (UTC)
Her hand, golden brown, warm, living, looks like an intruder against his pallor.

I love this description. Very sad and poetic.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 23rd, 2011 09:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you. It's odd how melancholy intimacy can be.
relurker
Mar. 24th, 2011 11:57 am (UTC)
sweet and sexy!
treadingthedark
Jan. 29th, 2012 05:33 pm (UTC)
Lovely!
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