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Drabble: Under Torture

Title: Under Torture
Warning: Fluffiest fluff
Words: 100
Prompt: forty lashes (Probably more than forty, in fact.)
Rating: PG
Setting: happy post-series Anywheretown


"Stop! Can't… take… any… more…. Dammit woman, I'm not kidding around."

"Aww, you're no fun." She pouts, giving it the full-on lip wobble, though her eyes will be dancing when the grimace fades.

He loves her like this, kittenish and funning, because it's such a conscious joke version of her true power. Shows her confidence in what they have that she's happy to play the ditsy wench for him, knowing she'll keep his respect after.

Still not going to let her keep on with the torture, though. Her bloody butterfly kisses on his sensitive areas? Ticklish isn't even the word.

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norwie2010
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:20 pm (UTC)
Ticklish isn't even the word.

Thanks! :D
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:26 pm (UTC)
*g* You're totally welcome.
moscow_watcher
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:35 pm (UTC)
Heee! The story absolutely made my day! (or, rather, night) *g*
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:42 pm (UTC)
Yay! Glad you liked it.
gryfndor_godess
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:37 pm (UTC)
This is so cute!

He loves her like this, kittenish and funning, because it's such a conscious joke version of her true power. Shows her confidence in what they have that she's happy to play the ditsy wench for him, knowing she'll keep his respect after.

I would never have thought of exactly why (or been able to articulate) her playfulness could be such a turn-on and what it would mean, but you describe it perfectly. This is such a great use of 100 words.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:44 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm glad it rings true.
quinara
Mar. 15th, 2011 10:48 pm (UTC)
*snorfle* This is some fluffy fluff of awesome.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:44 pm (UTC)
Heh. Powder-puff fluffy is a nice change at times!
slaymesoftly
Mar. 16th, 2011 12:42 am (UTC)
Hee! I almost didn't read it, thinking the torture warning was real - then I realized it was sb_fag_ends and took a peek. I likey.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
*g* Glad you peeked!
snickfic
Mar. 16th, 2011 01:42 am (UTC)
Awwwww. :)
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
*g* Thanks!
eatenbyafly
Mar. 16th, 2011 01:58 am (UTC)
Incredibly cute.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
readerjane
Mar. 16th, 2011 09:16 am (UTC)
Aww! Just the thing for insomnia. Well, no, it doesn't make me sleepy. Makes me happy to be awake. :-)
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:45 pm (UTC)
I'm glad! Happy dreams when you do sleep, too.
shapinglight
Mar. 16th, 2011 12:44 pm (UTC)
Heh! Nicely done, and tickling is so torture. Yes it is.
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:46 pm (UTC)
It totally is torture. Glad you liked!
hello_spikey
Mar. 16th, 2011 01:22 pm (UTC)
HEEE!

So cute!

Adorable torture. :)
brutti_ma_buoni
Mar. 16th, 2011 06:46 pm (UTC)
*g* Thank you!
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