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I couldn't pass over the joining of two of my greatest obsessions interests, Spuffy and Shakespeare. Considering the prompt came from my favourite comedy, this is a somewhat grim ficlet, though no actual sex or violence beyond what we have already seen on screen.

Title:The course of true love never did run smooth.
S6, just after Dead Things - yes, another variant on what happened after the alley scene.
972 words according to my machine.

The course of true love never did run smooth.

He came to just half an hour before sunrise.

Correction. He first came to not long after she had stalked out of the alley. He even moved a little. A sort of crawl-cum-roll, like climbing the North Face of Main Street, but much harder. He’d made it all the way to the wall before passing out again. Threw up a little, by the looks of it. Probably why nobody had tried to rouse him. Drunks weren’t so common in Sunnyhell as they were in LA, say, but battered drunks? Always worth avoiding, in case they were still drunk enough to fight back. He even had a sort of sympathy for that point of view, these days, with that sodding chip inside him.

It was a useful wall, if you had to be comatose at the foot of any wall. It had rough bits where bricks had been chipped off, so he had handles of a sort to haul himself up on. Only five minutes later and he was standing up. Then with a bit of care he staggered to the corner in less than five more minutes.

Now what? Launch himself across the road and hope he could stay upright long enough to hit the kerb on the other side? Perhaps he could use that sway to advantage, build up a bit of momentum. He pushed away a little, fell back, pushed off more strongly, bounced back and he was off.

OK, so he must have looked like a right pansy, tittuping across the road like that. Some sort of stupid poncey dancer with a limp. Still, he got there, didn’t he? More or less upright too, for which, bonus marks.

He had a little lean against the wall for a minute. Cool, rough texture felt good against his face. It was tempting to stay right there, watch the sunrise. But the girl might need a punch bag again. Or something else.

That thought pushed him on a few more steps, round the corner, along the road to Restfield gates. He was able to grip onto those, knuckles whitening even more than usual, arm over arm hauling himself along to the entry till there was no more gate and quite a lot of space. Definite red in the sky over there, too.

He didn’t quite remember how he got as far as his crypt, but there was a familiar sizzling sound and just the beginnings of a fried bacon smell when he finally staggered through the door and fell across the cold slab.

He lay on the slab, which was about right for the raw meat he felt he was, for several hours. The dance of a sunbeam across his outstretched hand finally made him move, so he was half-sitting when the door banged open and his girl. No, not his girl, never his girl. strode in. He groaned, then clamped his mouth shut as he struggled partly upright.

“Hello there, pet. Not banged up in chokey yet, then?” He managed a grimace that was halfway to a smile. Buffy glared back.

“No, Spike. I am here, as you can see.” She gulped. Odd, that.

“Yes, love, I was joking. Just a bit. No need to get your luscious knickers in a twist.” Somehow he managed the lascivious tongue-thing to go with the innuendo. No dice, though.

Buffy stared around the crypt, at the window, at the cobwebs, pretty much anywhere but at him. Par for the course that. Then she stiffened her spine, stuck out her chin and inhaled deeply.

“I came to tell you something. I didn’t kill that girl. Neither of us did.”

His lips parted, his eyes widened, that intense blue gaze never wavering from her. ”So?”

“So nothing. It was some sort of demon. Rawalpindi or some such. It made the time go all fuddled.”

“Rwasundi, you mean?” he exhaled. He hadn’t realised he’d been holding any breath. Hadn’t realised he’d inhaled any. That explained a lot. “So that’s why things went all timey-wimey for you? So what did happen, then?”

“Warren. You remember, your geeky sex-toy maker of choice. Looks like he and his pals got careless and his ex caught the backlash.”

Spike really, really didn’t want to think about that bloody bot now. Instead he focussed on important stuff. “So, not big confession time with Mr Plod this week, then? Can’t say I regret that.”

“No, no confessions from me. Warren and his boys, though, they are going to pay. And, Spike, this has to be the end. Of, well, whatever this is, I mean.”

He smiled, slowly, and moved, just a little, towards her. “That’s not exactly a new one on me, pet. D’you think now’s the best time, with me so sore and you so short of sleep?”

She blinked, paused, and finally took in the extent of the bruises on his face. Glory had made that sort of mess a year ago. This time it was no Big Bad. Spike waited, watched her work that out, think through what her next move had to be.

“I think I need to apologise. No, no more of, well, of that. But I’d better help you get downstairs, wash some of those cuts down. No fondling, though. And definitely no sex.”

As she busied herself about the crypt, getting the ladder ready, finding a bowl and a cloth to take down, then turned to lift him, she didn’t see his little smile. It was a rough path, OK, he knew that. But true love was like that. Much more of this and she’d see he was right for her, good for her. Destined for her.

Buffy grasped him beneath his armpits and heaved. He passed out, briefly, from the pain. But it was worth it.

Comments and feedback are as water to one in the desert for me...

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spuffy_luvr
Jan. 19th, 2013 02:00 am (UTC)
Such a painful moment, but I always like stories where she (sooner rather than later) checks on him.
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 07:50 am (UTC)
Thanks. I can't believe she doesn't see him at all till her party. Not that he's in any fit state...

Thanks for reading and commenting.
readerjane
Jan. 19th, 2013 02:13 am (UTC)
(Comments and feedback are as water to one in the desert for me...)

and your fic is as bread to my soul.

I think I love tiny movements like this. Not grand, tearful reconciliations, but the actions so quiet they could almost slip by unnoticed. A private smile. A bowl of water.
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 07:51 am (UTC)
What a lovely and kind thing to say. Thank you so much.
nopromises2011
Jan. 19th, 2013 04:17 am (UTC)
Such a sweet moment, sort of peaceful at the end. Could fit easily into canon.
Spike's right, much more of that and Buffy would realize how good they would be together.
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 07:51 am (UTC)
Thank you!
rebcake
Jan. 19th, 2013 05:27 am (UTC)
He passed out, briefly, from the pain. But it was worth it.

Oh, Spike! This is really quite tragic and will end in something a lot worse than tears!

I really liked your description of his stagger home. Not pretty, but he's a survivor.

Great fic, m'dear. I think people are taking different things from it, which is a sign you're doing something right, I think!
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 07:53 am (UTC)
Thanks. I have to say, I'm surprised by the variety of ways people are reading this. I think I'll stay discreet about what I intended...

Thanks for your kind feedback.
zanthinegirl
Jan. 19th, 2013 05:54 pm (UTC)
Oh man, you are breaking my heart with this one!

gorgeous and believable; this is a very in character season 6 Spike. Guh.
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 11:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you. My poor boy just never gives up hoping...
waddiwasiwitch
Jan. 19th, 2013 08:57 pm (UTC)
Oh I liked this a lot. Good missing scene. I always wondered what happened.
gillo
Jan. 19th, 2013 11:13 pm (UTC)
There are lots of versions of this. I don't see Buffy as over-sympathetic, but I like to think she would have some memory of what she did to him.

Thanks for reading and commenting.
loopybell
Jan. 20th, 2013 10:12 am (UTC)
You made me smile with your brilliant description of him trying to make it home. Would love to think she would have checked on him, but 'real Buffy' probably didn't spare him a second thought. So your version is much better...
gillo
Jan. 20th, 2013 03:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I hate to think that she didn't see him again until he gatecrashed her party, however stressed she was feeling. :-(
brutti_ma_buoni
Jan. 20th, 2013 09:58 pm (UTC)
Loved this setup; that painful journey of Spike back to his crypt. The mountaineering metaphor is great. And that last para, so evocative of Spike's state of mind, and how practical he can be about things.
gillo
Jan. 20th, 2013 10:09 pm (UTC)
Thanks. The origin of the metaphor was a Python sketch - we know Spike's a fan, after all. It sort of took over, then.

Poor boy. He honestly still has hope, right up to SR.
shapinglight
Jan. 25th, 2013 02:45 pm (UTC)
Poor Spike! He is so absolutely and completely clueless.
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